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Violence levels are increasing in USA. Guns are allowed to use. Is that a possitive fact? give your opinion

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Nowadays, in some countries like the USA, having a gun at home is allowed,
this
 fact causes citizens insecurity
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 since these can be obtained in stores that sell to anyone that want it. I do not agree with
this
 law at all, since, as has been demonstrated, the
use
 of weapons against children and adolescents in schools, has caused various deaths through no fault of the victims, since many times they are not even known, and not only
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 but there are many adults who
use
 them to shamelessly kill innocent people, sometimes even their own families. The free obtaining of guns means that many people who are not capable to administrate
this
 can buy one to take justice on their own, and these feel powerful. As we have seen in some news recently, the police themselves sometimes make
use
 of these without
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 for reasons of racism, these being protected by the country's justice since they say that they
use
 them in
self-defense
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 when it has been shown that
this
 is not the case because they shoot before asking. In my opinion, no one should have a weapon at home for the power that
this
 offers to the owner, because is not a natural power,
also
 he can
use
 the weapon to do evil, and not protect himself as in theory those who agree to sell guns say it. If no human being could have the option of owning a weapon, no one would have to defend themselves, the
use
 of violence should not be tolerated in any way, especially when the news shows us that many times they cause
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 of innocents who cannot defend themselves. In
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 I’m in total disagreement with the
use
 of guns, and they have to forbid
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