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The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050.
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The table indicates the
population
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 of four countries in 2003,
as well as
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 the predicted data for the years 2025 and 2050.
Overall
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, Indonesia was the country having the largest
population
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 and is projected to increase in future.
In contrast
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, the
population
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 in Italy is foreseen to be lower in the future than in the previous data.
First,
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there were 238
million
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 in the
population
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 in Indonesia. it is not only that the number of Indonesian was the highest value in 2003, but
also
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 is predicted to have an obvious rise to 274
million
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 in 2025 and 312
million
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 in 2050. Regarding Argentina, the number of people in
this
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 country was recorded as 34
million
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 in 2003 and has a bulge to be an almost double figure in 2050, presenting 62
million
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. the
population
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 in the Republic of Korea is forecasted to increase to 52
million
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 in 2025 and remain stable until 2050, with 48
million
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 recorded in 2003.
However
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, Italy is the only country predicted to be declining in
population
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 in
this
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 table. there were 54
million
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 Italian in 2003 and
this
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 will be decreasing to 47
million
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 in 2025. The downtrend will be kept there will be 45
million
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 Italian in 2050.
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