The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart visualizes how much is the average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions from 1967 to 2027 for every person in some Europe countries, measured in metric tonnes.
Overall
, Portugal and Italy showed a significant surge in Co2 emission per person, and Sweden had become the least one. Meanwhile, the United Kingdom witnessed a slight decline, but it had a dramatic rise compared to others.
To commence with, Portugal and Italy were substantial growth from 1967 to 1977, taking up 2 and 6 of CO2 emissions in metric tonnes respectively. Linking Words
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in 1977, Italia experienced a slight climb and remained stable until the Linking Words
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followed by the latter one at around 5. Meanwhile, Sweden had increased rapidly starting from 8 to 10 in 1997, but it plunged during the Linking Words
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, there was a dramatic increase in carbon dioxide emissions in the UK at around 11 at the beginning period among the others, Linking Words
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at the end
of the period decreased by 2.Linking Words
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