The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table
provide
the Change the verb form
provides
amount
of police budget from different sources
, while
the pie charts illustrate the percentage of money
expenditure from 2017 to 2018 in an area of Britain.
Overall
, the total amount
of police budget in 2018 was more than in 2017, where the National Government provided the highest amount
of money
in both years
. In addition
, the greatest money
spending
was Replace the word
spent
for
paying Change preposition
on
officers
and staff’s salaries.
Stood at 304.7m in 2017, the total Change noun form
officers'
officer's
amount
of police
budget in 2018 increased by around 13m. In 2017, National Government was the biggest Correct article usage
the police
sources
in Fix the agreement mistake
source
this
years
, funding more than 175m. The second rank was from Local Taxes and followed by other sources
at around 90m and 38m, respectively. In the next years
, three sources
were in the
similar rank as in the first year with Correct article usage
a
small
additional Add an article
a small
the small
amount
of money
of
each Change preposition
for
sources
.
The Change to a singular noun
source
money
that
collected from plenty of Correct pronoun usage
apply
sources
was spent for
Change preposition
on
employees
income being the majority expenditure in 2017 and 2018, 75% and 69%, respectively. It Change noun form
employees'
employee's
followed
by building and transport spending by 17% in both Add a missing verb
was followed
years
. Moreover
, the least money
spending
on technology was under 15% in all Replace the word
spent
years
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sources, money, years, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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