The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table
provide
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the
amount
of police budget from different
sources
,
while
the pie charts illustrate the percentage of
money
expenditure from 2017 to 2018 in an area of Britain.
Overall
, the total
amount
of police budget in 2018 was more than in 2017, where the National Government provided the highest
amount
of
money
in both
years
.
In addition
, the greatest
money
spending
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was
for
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on
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paying
officers
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officers'
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and staff’s salaries. Stood at 304.7m in 2017, the total
amount
of
police
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budget in 2018 increased by around 13m. In 2017, National Government was the biggest
sources
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source
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in
this
years
, funding more than 175m. The second rank was from Local Taxes and followed by other
sources
at around 90m and 38m, respectively. In the next
years
, three
sources
were in
the
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similar rank as in the first year with
small
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a small
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additional
amount
of
money
of
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for
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each
sources
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. The
money
that
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collected from plenty of
sources
was spent
for
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on
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employees
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income being the majority expenditure in 2017 and 2018, 75% and 69%, respectively. It
followed
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by building and transport spending by 17% in both
years
.
Moreover
, the least
money
spending
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on technology was under 15% in all
years
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sources, money, years, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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