The government intends to ban smoking in public areas. Some people say that it is a good idea, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Smoking has been a hazardous habit throughout the world for centuries. Some

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believe a refusal on smoking in public areas can reduce some of the dangers of smoking.

However

, others say that prohibition can bring some harmful effects too. First of all, in a public area,

such

as a park, there could be

smokers

and non-

smokers

. When a community

smoke

in

such

places it can not only affect

smokers

but

also

has an effect on non-

smokers

.

This

is called passive smoking and it can cause more harm than active smoking.

Also

, children and young adults can see

smokers

enjoying smoking.

This

may create an interest in them to

smoke

.

Therefore

, without their knowledge,

smokers

can induce others to

smoke

.

Thus

, a ban on smoking can reduce all the above harmful effects.

However

, the refusal may

also

create some problems. When people are forced to stop smoking in public areas, they may choose to

smoke

at home. When they do

this

, their family can be affected negatively. The

smokers

’ children can be affected by passive smoking and they may get addicted to it by following adults.

In addition

,

this

boycott can have an effect on tourism. Tourists may choose a country where they can

smoke

than visit a non-smoking country.

This

could especially affect countries that are dependent on tourism. In conclusion, I would like to say that it is very

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to force the community to stop smoking in public areas.

Instead

, the government should implement awareness programs to make the public understand that it is good to quit

smoke

.

This

will help us to

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a healthy society and a green country