e diagram below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the main information and make comparison where relevant.

e diagram below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the main information and make comparison where relevant.
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The diagram provides data about the method of manufacturing frozen fish pies from the stage of delivering unprocessed aliments to the final product. At the first glance, there are defined 18 important steps of production and main products, which are peas, sauce,
potatoes
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and
salmon
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.
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, another important detail is that
potatoes
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and
salmon
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go through different pathways of preparation, being mixed in the final stage. The first line has described the procedure of vegetable preparation, which begins with at least one month of delivery, followed by 8 steps. In
this
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period
potatoes
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are cleaned, peeled, sliced, boiled,
then
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chilled and stored. On the second line are steps of
salmon
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's cooking, which
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begins with a12-hours delivery.
After
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this
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, the fish is spiced with lemon juice and salt for taste and baked. The next spet is the removal of bones and skins after which the
salmon
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passes an inspection. In the end, fish is mixed with prepared beans, sauce and stored
potatoes
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, wrapped and frozen.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words potatoes, salmon with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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