In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose art (e.g. literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (e.g. physics). Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?

We can tell a lot about a student by the
subject
they choose in their university.
While
girls are believed to have opted for an art
subject
(e.g. literature), boys are believed to have a liking for
science
subjects (e.g. physics). In
this
essay, I will give some reasons as to why
this
happens and explain my view with examples.
Firstly
, each and every individual has a liking of their own. There might be a possibility
where
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that
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women think subjects
such
as
science
tend to be monotonous and difficult in nature.
Where as
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the field of literature is more varied, is more suitable to their liking and has different
criterias
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criteria
to choose from.
On the other hand
, family pressure plays an essential role in the
subject
that boys choose.
For instance
, a survey presented by BBC revealed that around 75% of male students opted for
science
as their
course
under peer pressure.
Secondly
, I believe parents should allow their children to pursue any
subject
of their choice.
This
should not be limited
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the courses of
science
and arts, but
also
for
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the
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apply
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other fields like commerce, biology and sports. If the students are forced to choose something which they do not like,
then
there are high chances of them performing
poor
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in these subjects.
In addition
,
this
might affect their confidence and would create problems for the entirety of the
course
.
For example
, a student proficient in math, if forced to follow a completely different line of
course
would find it problematic
to conclude
the
course
. In conclusion,
although
it is
belived
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believed
that girls are more likely to choose arts and boys have a liking for
science
, I believe it should be left upon the individuals to choose a stream which they like.
This
would not only make them confident, but they would gain expertise in their primary profession.
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  • unconscious bias
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