The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university

did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the

salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The pie chart provides data about the most popular destinations for Anthropology that are chosen by
students
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who finished one university,
together with
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a table that shows the salaries of Anthropology workers with five-year experience in three fields. The data chart shows, half of
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students
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the students
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who finished university get a full-time job, followed by those who choose to apply for postgraduate study, which accounts for 15%. After graduating, almost 12% remain unemployed,
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8% of graduates decide to take a part-time job and continue their studies. The percentage of
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about whom there is no information is 8%. From the information shown in the table, the most profitable jobs are in the government sector, where is the most possible to have the highest salary(50%), followed by freelance consulting with
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80% probability of getting a salary between 75 and 100 thousand dollars. The most low-payed jobs are in private companies, where is the highest probability of getting a low-paid job,10%, compared with the previous two where the probability is 5%.
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there is the lowest chance to get a high salary, which is 30%.
To sum up
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, most parts of Anthropology
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continue their career path in
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domain, the highest prospects being in freelance consulting and government sectors, which are the most well-paid jobs in
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field.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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