in the future people may longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. all payments may have to be made by card or using phones do you think this will happen one day? why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

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payment methods will dramatically develop in the near future and the public tendency for using

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will be declined.

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essay will discuss the paradigm shift toward utilizing cards and phones

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of

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for daily payments and state the writer’s opinions on the possibility of

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change

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mentioning the reasoning of those who still prefer

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. In spite of many disadvantages

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as lack of security, damage, cost and inconvenience during carrying large amounts,

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was the only way of purchasing goods for most

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recent years,

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the invention of credit cards and smartphones, new payment methods are being introduced which are gaining popularity

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among young generations.

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might be a means of disease spreading,

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many

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discontinued using

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for daily purchases and preferred electronic devices over

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for their daily life. As cards and smartphones are more convenient and secure, the tendency to use them

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is growing dramatically,

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there are some

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who are against

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new technologies has always been present in the history of mankind. The author believes that

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might be the tendency to stick to old habits, as many might find it difficult to accept and trust new banking systems and smartphone applications for buying and selling stuff. In conclusion, it seems that

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revolution has already happened, and

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a tiny majority of

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older generations are lagging to accept it, most

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are enjoying the convenience and security of using new payment methods.