in the future people may longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. all payments may have to be made by card or using phones do you think this will happen one day? why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Many believe that

due to

technological advances in financial systems,

the

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payment methods will dramatically develop in the near future and the public tendency for using

cash

will be declined.

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essay will discuss the paradigm shift toward utilizing cards and phones

instead

of

cash

for daily payments and state the writer’s opinions on the possibility of

this

change

while

mentioning the reasoning of those who still prefer

cash

. In spite of many disadvantages

such

as lack of security, damage, cost and inconvenience during carrying large amounts,

cash

was the only way of purchasing goods for most

people

;

however

, in

the

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recent years,

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the invention of credit cards and smartphones, new payment methods are being introduced which are gaining popularity

especially

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among young generations.

Moreover

, during the Covid-19 breakthrough,

this

concerned

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raised that

the

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cash

might be a means of disease spreading,

thus

many

people

discontinued using

cash

for daily purchases and preferred electronic devices over

cash

for their daily life. As cards and smartphones are more convenient and secure, the tendency to use them

instead

of

cash

is growing dramatically,

however

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there are some

people

who are against

this

change, reminding that

such

resistances

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to

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new technologies has always been present in the history of mankind. The author believes that

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reason for

this

might be the tendency to stick to old habits, as many might find it difficult to accept and trust new banking systems and smartphone applications for buying and selling stuff. In conclusion, it seems that

this

revolution has already happened, and

while

a tiny majority of

people

,

specially

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older generations are lagging to accept it, most

people

are enjoying the convenience and security of using new payment methods.