The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table compares the percentage use of various kinds of fuels to generate

electricity

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between 5 Asian countries in 2005.

overall

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, every country doesn't rely on one source to produce

electricity

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. As we can see, Malaysia and Singapore

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depend

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the most on coal and lignite as the sources of

electricity

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accounting for 61% and 42% respectively. And it is far below 10% in other countries.

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, both had a little percentage of use of Petroleum products and Hydro & wind it didn't exceed 6% as like japan.

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, south korea used the most energy from hydro and wind to produce

electricity

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(48%). Now moving to nuclear energy, we see it's the second most used energy in Malaysia (19%), and South Korea (33%) and it overstepped the others in japan with 49%

while

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it's null in Thailand. Thailand on the other side uses the most different kinds of fuel mentioned in the table to generate

electricity

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mh.amani

Mar 8, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

156 words

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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that technology such as mobile phones has destroyed social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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