The graph below shows the population figures for different type of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.

The graph below shows the population figures for different type of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012.
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The provided chart depicts the indicators of
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turtles
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population
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between 4 different types in India over 32 years period from 1980 to 2012.
Overall
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, the
population
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of Olive Ridley
turtles
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saw
an
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enormous growth,
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the
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of Leatherback
turtles
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decreased significantly. Green
turtles
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and all species saw a modest decline and incline respectively.
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Population
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The population
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of all types was about 100 in 1980 and in the following
1982
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each
population
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went up on average of 5. Before jumping to just above 110 in 1987
population
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of leatherback
turtles
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fell to 100 in 1983. Continuing fall with some fluctuations the
population
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of Leatherback
turtles
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was lowest compared to other populations and represented just under 60 in 2012.
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, the
population
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of green
turtles
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also
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fell over the period with big fluctuations and accounted for approximately 90
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of the loop.
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, the
population
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of Olive Ridley
Turtles
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reached its peak at almost 140 surpassing all other populations and was around 130 in the year 2012. Before 2002 the
population
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of all other species fluctuated and was about 100
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year.
Then
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continuing gradually increasing it accounted for almost 110
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of the span.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words turtles, population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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