The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in furniture industry.

The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in furniture industry.
This
process diagram provides information about the mechanism of manufacturing
of
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steel
rods in the industry of furniture.
Overall
,
this
process is compounded by seven steps, beginning with the raw material and ending with the finished tested product. In the beginning, the raw material composed of three elements, iron ore, yellow ore and carbon, is mixed in order to melt in the next
stage
at the temperature of 1300-1500 degrees. The liquid mass is refined to ensure that the composition doesn't have any impurities and
then
it is poured into ingots in the fourth
stage
. In the subsequent
stage
, the forms are connected to a cooling reservoir to reduce
steel
temperature and ensure stabilisation.
Further
, is running the process of
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, when rods are passed through rollers, heating
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and measuring automaton. Once the desired result is obtained, the
steel
sticks are cut and stamped, before the final test. After passing the final
stage
, the trial of making
steel
rods is finished.
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