The diagram illustrates how steel rods are manufactured in furniture industry.
This
process diagram provides information about the mechanism of manufacturing of
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steel
rods in the industry of furniture.
Overall
, this
process is compounded by seven steps, beginning with the raw material and ending with the finished tested product.
In the beginning, the raw material composed of three elements, iron ore, yellow ore and carbon, is mixed in order to melt in the next stage
at the temperature of 1300-1500 degrees. The liquid mass is refined to ensure that the composition doesn't have any impurities and then
it is poured into ingots in the fourth stage
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In the subsequent stage
, the forms are connected to a cooling reservoir to reduce steel
temperature and ensure stabilisation. Further
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and measuring automaton. Once the desired result is obtained, the Fix the agreement mistake
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steel
sticks are cut and stamped, before the final test. After passing the final stage
, the trial of making steel
rods is finished.Submitted by verdesecaterina2004 on
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