Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport.However, it is still unpopular in many countries. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of the bicycle among wider population?

Cycling
instead
of driving
car
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assist in term of reducing carbon emission in the environment.
However
still not popular
internatioally
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internationally
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essay , I will outline reasons and my recommmitdetion to solve the era. Cyclings have
a significant benefits
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in
term
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of the health of
individual
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and climate warming issues .
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example
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consistent cycling helps reduce the chance of heart attack by 50% and maintain the body shape. Another
benefits
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to climate
is
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that cycling is friendly
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have zero impact on the environment unlike driving
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vehicle
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.
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not common options as
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to be to people and that could
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to two main reasons.
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the lack of availability of
this
service
everywhere, most
of
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cycling
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the cycling
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service
is provided in
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citycenter
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city center
.
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in
Japan
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there is more than 40 company unlike
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where is not available at all.
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, the price of the
service
in many
country
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expensive
unlike
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public
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bus
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. In KSA
as
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example
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on
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way
trip
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cost 4$
while
bus round trips cost 2.50$ which made it logical to
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the most economical
opition
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despite the
environment
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environmental
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impact of that
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choose
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. To solve the problem government should provide the
service
everywhere and invest in
high quality
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service
with accessible and
afford
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the price
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price
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.
Additionaly
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, in
first
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stage of planning cycling should be considered.
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,
cost
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and availability of cycling
considered
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main
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common
reason
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while
the solution is to provide it in
wide
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range including
suburb
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. could
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to two main reasons the first one is the government not provide the
service
everywhere, mainly the cycling in
citycenter
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city center
which could
hard
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for working people who lives far
a way
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away
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and without doubt
perfer
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prefer
bus or private car to drop them to their
destention
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destination
.
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, the
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quality
qaulity
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quality
of
service
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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