The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the UK adolescents' ratio who is considering a vegetarian
diet
between 1960 to 2020.
Overall
, the plant based
Add a hyphen
plant-based
diet
among young people is
peaked Unnecessary verb
apply
in
16%. In Change preposition
at
early
Correct article usage
the early
1960's
some people Fix apostrophe usage
1960s
start
to consume Wrong verb form
started
vegetarian
Correct article usage
a vegetarian
diet
and this
action increased gradually for a
20 years. After 1980, Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
plant based
food consumption dropped Add a hyphen
plant-based
10
% in 1990. 5 years laterChange preposition
by 10
than
, fluctuation Correct word choice
apply
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
occured
until 2000. In the year Correct your spelling
occurred
of
2000, only 5% of adolescents follow Change preposition
apply
this
strict diet
. Between 2000 and 2010 graphic
reveals to increase gradually. Fix the agreement mistake
graphics
Then
it becomes more
steadier than Change the word
apply
other
periods in the Change preposition
in other
last
decade.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words diet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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