You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Attridge, I write to inform you of the adjustments in the time for my evening

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. I have a permanent role which I formerly resume at 8:00am and close at 4:00pm.

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arrangement was able to accommodate my part-time evening

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. But recently, my line manager changed the time to 9:00am to 5:30pm.

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, I will not be able to continue the weekedays evening

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because when I close, I am tired, and I would not be active in class if I decided to come.

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, I would need to prepare for the next work day and rest.

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, I will like to request for a change in my lecture days to weekends, where I am available both Saturdays and Sundays.

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can be in the morning or afternoon depending on your schedule and when

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hold. In conclusion, I will appreciate if my request is granted because I really would like to complete my course. Yours Faithfully, Jennie Broadhurst

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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