With increasing population and ever-growing urban centres, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

The ecological
problem
caused by the reduction of natural
spots
and deforestation of new residential areas is constantly growing in parallel with the rising level of urbanization. For the purpose of conservation of green spaces, some natural
spots
are protected by law.
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following paragraphs will be discussed advantages and drawbacks of
this
environmental policy.
To begin
with, the protection of natural lands through transforming them in National Prks or Scientific Reservations has a positive impact on
ecological
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situation and stagnates climate change.
Additionally
, the reservations are the perfect places for hiking, jogging and other leisure activities, useful for human health.
Furthermore
, it contributes to
protection
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of some rare species of animals that are extermination endangered and gives them suitable conditions to survive.
On the other hand
, it reduces the potential residential areas that may lead to
lack
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of accommodations for citizens, leaving a lot of people homeless.
However
,
this
problem
may be solved
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old houses and building new, modern skyscrapers with a huge capacity of flats.
Therefore
, the
problem
with living
spots
is solved and nature is protected.
This
being said, It comes to the conclusion that the Advantages of protected areas overdraw the disadvantages of
such
a policy, since the importance of natural
spots
for the planet are uncontestable, and all the alternatives that exist
besides
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