A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Regarding the perspectives suggest that it is the obligation of individuals to take care of their

health

instead

of the government. I strongly disagree with

such

opinions since governments have more power and resources to enhance the quality of

health

in public with different methods, including cultivating the younger generation with a healthy life-stylet and advancing medical systems. First of all, it is essential for young individuals to be aware of the importance to have an active life to reduce the diseases caused by lack of exercise.

Moreover

, schools that provide meals are able to assist their students to form healthy eating habits. With the help of

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authorities

, youth could gain the essential knowledge to maintain a quality life in the future.

For example

, in the UK, the government start to encourage educational institutions to introduce correlative courses to foster students being aware of the nutrition contained in various foods,

along with

it, knowing how to make smart choices regarding the food they intake.

Secondly

, it is hard for private

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pharmacy

companie

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companies

to find solutions to cure rare diseases, which barely

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commercial benefit, only government are able to invest a tidy sum to make progress in

such

areas.

Furthermore

, it is crucial for

govenments

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governments

to come out with policies to ensure the right for everyone to receive

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medical care. In Taiwan, the national

health

insurance policy

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everyonw

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everyone

to enjoy

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medical resources, including those who struggling

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financial difficulties.

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, despite

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fact that people should take care of

themselve

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themselves

for having a

healthly

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healthy

life, the involvement of governments is essential since they have sufficient sources and influence, be it improving the acquisition of

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knowledge in schools,

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advancing

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medical systems.

Therefore

, in my perspective,

governmnet

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government

governments

have the

responsible

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on

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people's

health

.