Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays, in all of the cities in the world the amount of driving

cars

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on the road

are

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numerous

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that

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which

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is the most reliable proof

about

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the quantity of ownership.

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the number of traffic jams

aren’t appeared

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don’t appear

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too much because

the

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enthusiasm of the police and the traffic

contructions

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constructions

contractions

, I completely agree with the statement. It is an undeniable fact that owning a

car

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or

cars

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is the best solution to prove the sociable effect on the community and to solve the transportation demand problems.

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, unlike the rural place where the

apperance

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appearance

of

the

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car

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is uncommon, in the metropolis where the standard of living is

incrediblely

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incredibly

high, having a high-class

car

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is

the

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symbol of rich,

because

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and because

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of that the

wealhiest

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wealthiest

people

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usually spend

the

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amount of money which may be equal to the asset of some

people

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for buying a

car

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to show their power and reputation. To elaborate, many celebrities own a luxury

car

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and constantly drive it to their

paries

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or celebrations, just by doing that, many

paparazzies

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paparazzi

will capture them with their “horse”, so their popularity will increase.

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Also

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not only the popular

people

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but

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the metropolis citizens

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want to have a

car

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because the

car

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is the most effective vehicle on the ground. By going deeper, we can know that the distance the

cars

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can go

with out

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without

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refuel is higher than other vehicles,

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because the

cars

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are spacious so it will afford the seat problems.

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,

the

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cars

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will be able for citizen

people

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who have long distances trips frequently just like visiting their family or their occasions. To reduce the number of

cars

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on the road,

goverments

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governments

have a

plenthora

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plethora

of ways to make it.

Goverments

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Governments

can make some rules about parking

place

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which

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cause

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problem or organise some events to motivate the

citizents

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citizens

to use their feet.

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, the

authoroties

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authorities

can mark the place for

people

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to park their

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car

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cars

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, by doing that, the road will be wider

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they can open

“

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a “walkin

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walkin

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walk-in

walking

walk in

road” on some specific

street

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streets

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to decrease the number of

trafficf

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traffic

jams

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it can be

unplesent

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unpleasant

to some

people

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. In the conclusion, at the present, we haven’t

have

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any

methords

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methods

method

to solve the situation. In my opinion,

the

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apply

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traffic jam is one of the

most

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largest civil unrest and

this

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problem need to be fixed as soon as possible.