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Some people suggest that it is a reasonable idea to organize school children’s ' transportation to educational institutions by the government but others say that it is parent's’ obligation responsibility.

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In the present age, whether the
government
 should provide commute facilities to
students
 or not has sparked a lot of debate. Some people assert that the
government
 should take some initiative to provide transportation for
students
 to reach their respective educational institutions,
whereas
 others believe it is not
responsibility
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 of the
government
 but it is of
thier
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their
parents
. Personally , I am in favour of the former view.
Convincing
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 argument can be made that
administrative
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an administrative
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transport
 system provides more secure journies.
Firstly
,
the
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government
transport
 provides safe and secure journeys so
parents
 do not have to worry about the safety of their
children
.
As a result
, the
parents
 can have
more
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 peaceful life.
Secondly
,
the
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administrative
transport
 covers almost all parts of the state including remote
area
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areas
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. Better
shcool
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school
 options are available in the outskirts of the cities in most of the regions.
Therefore
, the
children
 will have vast choices of schools for
thier
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their
 studies.
Thirdly
, the
government
 has
very
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 wide network of transportation and they need to modify it a little bit to fulfil the needs of
children
.
For example
, They may add an extra stoppage in an existing route wherever institutions are there.
As a result
,
majority
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 of the
students
 will start benefiting
the
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 reachability. Admittedly, the
parents
 dropping
children
to
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at
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school
 provides more flexibility and they do not have to wait for
a state vehicles
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state vehicles
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 to come;
hence
, they will get more amount of time to study. Even so, these
students
 use
this
 extra time in unproductive activities so there is no additional benefit as
such
.
Consequently
, the benefits of
parents
 dropping
children
to
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their
school
 are quite limited. In summary, I would concede that state
transport
 is better for
school
children
 rather than their
parents
 dropping them off at their
school
.
Overall
, I am convinced that the
government
 should provide
transport
to
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 schoolchildren
children
.
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