The diagram below shows how rain water is collected and then treated to be used as drinking water in an Australian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The schematic drawing represents the flow of how

rainwater

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is being saved, drained, and handled to make it drinkable in one city in Australia.

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, the processing of drinking

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from

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rain is

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a long process. It basically has three stages.

First,

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is draining,

then

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water

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storage, and

lastly

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water

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treatment

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. The process commences from draining. The

rainwater

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has to be drained by passing through a

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filter.

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, the

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goes all the way down to a huge

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storage. After some time, the

rainwater

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will be transferred to another

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tank for

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treatment

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. In the

water

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treatment

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phase, the

rainwater

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is treated with a mixture of chemicals. It is where the

rainwater

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undergoes some manipulation and maybe some sanitation.

Then

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, there is one pipe connecting

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the

water

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treatment

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tank going upwards to the houses. In the

last

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stage, the

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is

finally

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consumed by the people in an Australian town.