The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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graph is demonstrating the percentage of United Kingdom adolescents following a vegetarian diet in the period from 1960 to 2020.
as can be seen
a vegetable diet is starting in 1960. In 1960 it did start briskly increasing until 1960, Add a comma
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in 1960 it had its highest per cent, it was approximately 15 per cent. After 1960 it did start gradually decreasing until 1990. in the period of 1990 to 2000 itCorrect word choice
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did increase and decreased. since 2000 it did climbing until 2010. and Correct word choice
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finally
from 2010 to 2020 it gradually dropped.Add a comma
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