In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that this is the responsibility of governments to solve the problem. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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children

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is increasingly popular in many countries, which causes many harmful effects

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their health.

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I somewhat agree that governments have an essential role to perform in

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obesity

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crisis, I

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believe that the role of families and

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could not be underrated . On the one hand, governments are fundamental in tackling

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problem. The government could launch campaigns on the harmful effects of

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overweight ness

to raise citizens’ awareness .

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, the government can put restrictions on the advertisements of fast food on

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television or on the internet and encourage

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to use bicycles or exercise regularly.

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, it is obvious that families and

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have duties in mitigating the rate of

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among

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with, parents can encourage their

children

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to maintain a balanced diet and get away from low calories products which are one of the main factors resulting in weight gain among

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, more physical activities should get involved in

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’s daily

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to avoid

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lifestyle, which is believed to be one of the primary causes leading to

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. Taking regular exercise will make a great contribution to building a fit and strong body,

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restraining

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from being overweight.

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,

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should organize physical activities

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as exercise and folk dance at recess.

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, primary and secondary

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in Vietnam all organize exercises during recess. In conclusion , child

obesity

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is an issue that needs to be tackled immediately. It is essential for the government,

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and parents to take

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so that the problem can be solved quickly and effectively.