In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that this is the responsibility of governments to solve the problem. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity

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children

is increasingly popular in many countries, which causes many harmful effects

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their health.

While

I somewhat agree that governments have an essential role to perform in

this

obesity

crisis, I

also

believe that the role of families and

schools

could not be underrated . On the one hand, governments are fundamental in tackling

this

problem. The government could launch campaigns on the harmful effects of

overweightness

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to raise citizens’ awareness .

For instance

, the government can put restrictions on the advertisements of fast food on

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television or on the internet and encourage

children

to use bicycles or exercise regularly.

On the other hand

, it is obvious that families and

schools

also

have duties in mitigating the rate of

obesity

among

children

.

To begin

with, parents can encourage their

children

to maintain a balanced diet and get away from low calories products which are one of the main factors resulting in weight gain among

children

.

Additionally

, more physical activities should get involved in

children

’s daily

routine

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routines

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to avoid

sedentary

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lifestyle, which is believed to be one of the primary causes leading to

obesity

. Taking regular exercise will make a great contribution to building a fit and strong body,

thus

restraining

children

from being overweight.

Moreover

,

schools

should organize physical activities

such

as exercise and folk dance at recess.

For example

, primary and secondary

schools

in Vietnam all organize exercises during recess. In conclusion , child

obesity

is an issue that needs to be tackled immediately. It is essential for the government,

schools

and parents to take

actions

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so that the problem can be solved quickly and effectively.