The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the selling of a
coffee
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shop located in an office building on a typical weekday.
Overall
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, every period of the day is characterized by the
sales
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of a specific item, for ,instance in the
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morning the
sales
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of
pastries
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are overtaking the others accounting for 265. Looking into more details, we see that
besides
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pastries
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,
coffee
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is
also
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bought in a big quantity equal to 265,
,
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however
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fewer people bought tea and
sandwiches
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in the early morning. Between 10:30 and 2:30, most people order the most
sandwiches
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(200), followed by
coffee
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185, but there's still a big number who buy
pastries
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not like the early morning.
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, the sellings of tee decreased in the same period but the dramatic fall is afternoon,
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the
sales
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of
coffee
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and
pastries
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are slightly equal to almost 150. But the
sandwiches
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decreased quickly to 40 in
this
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period. In the evening, the
sales
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of
coffee
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overstepp the others with 200, followed by the
sandwiches
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but the
pastries
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and tea don't exceed 100.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sales, pastries, sandwiches with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • peak hours
  • trough in sales
  • high consumer demand
  • lunchtime surge
  • light meals
  • caffeine boost
  • sustained interest
  • fluctuate
  • comparison of products
  • typical weekday
  • busiest period
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