The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the selling of a
coffee
shop located in an office building on a typical weekday. Use synonyms
Overall
, every period of the day is characterized by the Linking Words
sales
of a specific item, for ,instance in the Use synonyms
,
morning the Remove the comma
apply
sales
of Use synonyms
pastries
are overtaking the others accounting for 265.
Looking into more details, we see that Use synonyms
besides
Linking Words
pastries
, Use synonyms
coffee
is Use synonyms
also
bought in a big quantity equal to 265, Linking Words
,
Change the punctuation
apply
Linking Words
however
fewer people bought tea and Add a comma
,however
sandwiches
in the early morning. Between 10:30 and 2:30, most people order the most Use synonyms
sandwiches
(200), followed by Use synonyms
coffee
185, but there's still a big number who buy Use synonyms
pastries
not like the early morning. Use synonyms
However
, the sellings of tee decreased in the same period but the dramatic fall is afternoon, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
sales
of Use synonyms
coffee
and Use synonyms
pastries
are slightly equal to almost 150. But the Use synonyms
sandwiches
decreased quickly to 40 in Use synonyms
this
period.
In the evening, the Linking Words
sales
of Use synonyms
coffee
overstepp the others with 200, followed by the Use synonyms
sandwiches
but the Use synonyms
pastries
and tea don't exceed 100.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sales, pastries, sandwiches with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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