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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Mr Smith My name is Tinotenda Amanda Potsekayi. I am writing
this
 letter to
apologising
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apologise
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 for the
the
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noise
 which was coming out of my house, next door on number A4. Let me start by explaining the reasons behind
such
 a
noise
, which was
due to
 a water pipe
lickage
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leakage
linkage
 in my kitchen. Because of that, I was forced to urgently remove all of the cupboards from the walls in order to get
it
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them
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 replaced by the plumber. Once again, I would really like you to forgive me for any disturbance that the
noise
 may have caused to your family.
However
, I informed the plumber about the
noise
 and
he
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that he
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 should try to work
on
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at
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low
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a low
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 volume. As the plumber will continue fixing my kitchen, I have scheduled it to occur during working hours only, so that the
noise
 will not affect you in the evening hours. Thank you for understanding  Yours Sincerely, Tinotenda
Submitted by tinotendamandapotsekayi on

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