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The table gives information about the average hours spent on the Internet by European people of different age groups.

The table gives information about the average hours spent on the Internet by European people of different age groups.
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The given table provides statistics on how many
hours
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 various age groups invest their time on the Net divided by gender in Europe. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that adolescents tend to spend days surfing the Internet,
while
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 elderly people do not use technology services as much. As the table shows,the group of 16-20 years scroll the Internet for 19
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 males and 18
hours
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 females followed by teenagers aged 11-15, who spend from 6 to 8
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, men consume 2
hours
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 more than women at 7
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 in the age group of 21-25. In terms of people older than 26 years, patterns are declining gradually. Both genders under 30 spend the same amount of time, 4
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 but middle-aged men (31-50) use the Internet for 3
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 women continue to keep a duration of 4
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. Eventually, people in their 50s find time for the world wide web for 2
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 men and 3
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 women in Europe.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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