The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts illustrate what
graduate
and postgraduate students
have done after finishing collage
in 2008 in England Correct your spelling
college
also
, that these students
did not go into a full-time jobs
.
Correct the article-noun agreement
a full-time job
full-time jobs
Firstly
, both graduate
and postgraduate students
went to further
study which got the highest number
of students
in the year 2008, but the number
of graduate
students
was much bigger than the postgraduate, it is 29,665. Furthermore
, part-time work
comes in second place for postgraduate students
at 2,535, followed by unemployment at 1,625. In addition
to voluntary work
had the lowest number
of postgraduate students
, that was 345. Consequently
, the number
of graduates students
that attended part-time work
or were not employed is almost the same 17,735 and 16,235 there is a small difference. Lastly
, we have voluntary work
got also
the
least count of Add a missing verb
has the
graduate
students
3,500.
In conclusion, that
Correct word choice
apply
further
study was the highest proportion in both groups and the lowest one was the voluntary work
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