The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts illustrate what
graduate
and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
have done after finishing Use synonyms
collage
in 2008 in England Correct your spelling
college
also
, that these Linking Words
students
did not go into Use synonyms
a full-time jobs
.
Correct the article-noun agreement
a full-time job
full-time jobs
Firstly
, both Linking Words
graduate
and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
went to Use synonyms
further
study which got the highest Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
in the year 2008, but the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
graduate
Use synonyms
students
was much bigger than the postgraduate, it is 29,665. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, part-time Linking Words
work
comes in second place for postgraduate Use synonyms
students
at 2,535, followed by unemployment at 1,625. Use synonyms
In addition
to voluntary Linking Words
work
had the lowest Use synonyms
number
of postgraduate Use synonyms
students
, that was 345. Use synonyms
Consequently
, the Linking Words
number
of graduates Use synonyms
students
that attended part-time Use synonyms
work
or were not employed is almost the same 17,735 and 16,235 there is a small difference. Use synonyms
Lastly
, we have voluntary Linking Words
work
got Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
the
least count of Add a missing verb
has the
graduate
Use synonyms
students
3,500.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
that
Correct word choice
apply
further
study was the highest proportion in both groups and the lowest one was the voluntary Linking Words
work
.Use synonyms
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