The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about how many
visitors
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to Ashdown Museum
during
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were during
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the year before and after
renovation
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while
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the pie charts illustrate the proportion of tourist satisfaction surveys at the same time.
Overall
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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and the result of satisfaction surveys rose after the
renovation
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. Stood at 92,000 after the
refurbishment
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, the proportion of tourists visiting Ashdown Museum was higher than before the
renovation
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by 18,000. Regarding the fulfilment survey of
visitors
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before and after
refurbishment
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, the
number
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of tourists who felt very satisfied doubled after the
refurbishment
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, from 15 to 35.
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,
visitors
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who experienced a satisfied feeling rose by 10 from 30 before the
renovation
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.
In contrast
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, after
refurbishment
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, the percentage of dissatisfied tourists dropped sharply by almost threefolds from 40 to 15.
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, the
number
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of
visitors
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was very dissatisfied decreasing after the
renovation
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, accounting for 5, the same
number
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as those who do not respond to the surveys.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, renovation, number, refurbishment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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