The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of creating alternative electricity
power
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in a geothermal
power
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plant which contains 5 states in detail from the cold
water
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tank to the
power
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grid.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the process of electricity making by geothermal has 2 sections: under the
ground
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and on the
ground
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.
In addition
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, they use a natural capability,
such
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as hot rock to make hot
water
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. In the first
step
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, the process begins underground with the
water
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in the cold-
water
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tank (placed on the
ground
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) being pumped by the cold-
water
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pump through the injection well (
step
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2). After that, the
water
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is heated by the hot rock in the geothermal zone and pumped up to the
ground
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surface by the hot
water
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pump(
step
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3). After being pumped to a high elevation, hot
water
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becomes steam in the condenser(
step
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4)
then
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the turbine is rolled by steam
then
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electricity is generated to the generator before being transmitted to the
power
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grid.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water, ground, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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