Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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So let`s talk about
habits
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. Obviously people divide
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into three parts: bad, normal and good,
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smoking – bad
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, chewing gum after dinner – normal
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, reading – good
one
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. But I think that almost all
habits
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could be divide an bad, normal and good just conditionally. And these are my arguments: 1.
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, in most cases people divide
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because of how it is influenced on person`s health. So they don`t consider
impact
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of
habit
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on person`s productivity, tolerance, happiness and self-confidence. And these factors are individually. For somebody getting up early and doing sport is useful and
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person will be more productivity and motivated. But for another
one
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it will be more pleasure to sleep longer on morning and do sport at evening because he sleeps better after exercises. So getting up early is a bad or good
habit
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? So we can`t divide the world in black and white. 2.
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, I think it is not correct to evaluate
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of
one
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habit
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and we need to evaluate
impact
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of all
habits
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in aggregate.
One
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man could smoke, drink alcohol and don`t do sport, but eating healthy
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and sleep well. Another man doesn`t smoke and drink alcohol but eat fast
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and drinking 3 tea per day with 3 tablespoons of sugar. Who of them will be more healthy, more productivity or more happiness? 3. What is more, I am not sure that the
impact
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of bad and good
habits
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is so big as a percentage if we speak of our health. I am sure that genetic affects of our health much more. So we all have some predisposition, like predisposition of fatness or diabetes and we can try to correct these think. I call these thing «Tolerance». So just there are
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that person could allow himself and
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that he couldn`t ant it is individual. 4.
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, doctors from all over the world are arguing about are some
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healthy or not.
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, smoking weed, periodic fasting, etc. But
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I can say some 100% bad
habits
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: 1. Smoking Tobacco. 2. Use hard drugs. 3. Don`t engage in your own treatment or treat any cold with antibiotics. 4. Eating too much
food
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, especially, greasy
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or too much sweets. 5. Sleep less than 6 hours per day. 6. Talking nasty
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about people. 7. etc
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Native literature
  • Cultural identity
  • Heritage
  • Traditions
  • National pride
  • Language skills
  • Idiomatic expressions
  • Engagement
  • Relatability
  • Broaden perspectives
  • Cultural awareness
  • Open-mindedness
  • Literary heritage
  • Bias
  • Diverse perspectives
  • Global community
  • Domestic vs. international literature
  • Cultural nuances
  • Sense of belonging
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