All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, more and more countries encounter a social issue that wealthy
people
are becoming more affluent, and poor people
are becoming poorer and existing in poverty. I believe there are some factors leading to this
consequence, and governments
can implement some policies to address this
problem.
The common reasons Correct pronoun usage
that cause
cause
social immobility and the economic crisis are implementing inadequate revenue policiesWrong verb form
causing
,
and inequality Remove the comma
apply
social
resources Change preposition
in social
distributions
in society. Fix the agreement mistake
distribution
For example
, affluent people
can hire experts in accounting to reduce their tax
payment
annually via other ways, Fix the agreement mistake
payments
such
saving
Change preposition
as saving
income
to
other countries, and doing commerce by cash Change preposition
for
payment
without official record. Thus
, governments
cannot receive adequate
amount of Add an article
an adequate
the adequate
tax
payment
from affluent people
’s actual income
. Also
, social resources are distributed inequality such
as education between poor people
and rich people
. For instance
, poor people
usually reside in rural or surban
Correct your spelling
suburban
area
, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
while
there are a lot of public libraries and reputable schools are
in cities where only affluent Unnecessary verb
apply
people
can afford the house pricing. Thus
, the children in
Change preposition
of
rich
family are Add an article
the rich
easily
Replace the word
easy
to
access educational facilities and materials to enter better colleges and have better job prospects.
To tackle Fix the infinitive
apply
this
social issue, governments
can introduce reasonable tax
policy
to receive Fix the agreement mistake
policies
precise
Add an article
the precise
amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
tax
payment
from rich families. Fix the agreement mistake
payments
Also
, this
revenue policy
can address the negative impact of inflation for
these Change preposition
on
low
Add a hyphen
low-income
income
and middle-class families. Additionally
, governments
can introduce various subsidies for low
Add a hyphen
low-income
income
families. For example
, governments
can provide subsides
for child caring, renting and educational Correct your spelling
subsidies
tuitions
, Fix the agreement mistake
tuition
such
as low interests
Fix the agreement mistake
interest
of
student loans or full reimbursement of Change preposition
on
tuitions
.
In conclusion, it is a worldwide social crisis when rich Fix the agreement mistake
tuition
people
are becoming richer or vise
versa. Change the spelling
vice
Although
this
problem can cause by the
improper revenue Correct article usage
apply
policy
and resources
distribution between rich and poor Change the noun form
resource
people
, I believe that governments
can implement a well
design Change the adverb
good
tax
policy
and proper subsidies to address this
problem.Submitted by jackson05234 on
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