All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, more and more countries encounter a social issue that wealthy

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are becoming more affluent, and poor

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are becoming poorer and existing in poverty. I believe there are some factors leading to

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consequence, and

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can implement some policies to address

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problem. The common reasons

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social immobility and the economic crisis are implementing inadequate revenue policies

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and inequality

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in social

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resources

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distribution

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in society.

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, affluent

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can hire experts in accounting to reduce their

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payment

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annually via other ways,

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saving

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as saving

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other countries, and doing commerce by cash

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without official record.

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,

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cannot receive

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amount of

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from affluent

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’s actual

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.

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, social resources are distributed inequality

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as education between poor

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and rich

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.

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, poor

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usually reside in rural or

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there are a lot of public libraries and reputable schools

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in cities where only affluent

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can afford the house pricing.

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, the children

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rich

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the rich

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family are

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to

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access educational facilities and materials to enter better colleges and have better job prospects. To tackle

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social issue,

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can introduce reasonable

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policy

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to receive

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amount

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of

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payment

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from rich families.

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,

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revenue

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can address the negative impact of inflation

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low-income

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and middle-class families.

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,

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can introduce various subsidies for

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families.

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,

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can provide

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for child caring, renting and educational

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as low

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student loans or full reimbursement of

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. In conclusion, it is a worldwide social crisis when rich

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are becoming richer or

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versa.

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problem can cause by

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improper revenue

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and

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distribution between rich and poor

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, I believe that

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can implement a

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design

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policy

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and proper subsidies to address

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problem.