Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by a small number of people ,some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages ,while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In
this
era of technology, several local languages
that
are no longer used by many Correct pronoun usage
apply
people
due to
its
only spoke by minority groups or Correct pronoun usage
their
etnics
Correct your spelling
ethics
ethnics
ethnic
in
particular
Add an article
a particular
the particular
country
. some individuals believe that the government should spend on saving these Fix the agreement mistake
countries
languages
while
others reject this
notion. From my personal point of view, spending on this
issue is such
a waste of money as the language did not contribute to the development of the country. This
essay will elaborate both
views and Change preposition
on both
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.
In regard to the first statement, the main reason why some people
believe that these nearly extinct languages
should be protected are
Change the verb form
is
because
their play a crucial role Replace the word
that
to
certain cultures Change preposition
in
especially
in religious activities. Add the comma(s)
,especially
Thus
, this
minor groups Correct determiner usage
these
afraid
that their future generation will not Add a missing verb
are afraid
able
to speak Add a missing verb
be able
mother
Correct pronoun usage
their mother
languages
like their ancestor. For example
, Malaysia has small groups of etnics
who mostly master their own Correct your spelling
ethnics
ethnic
ethics
languages
and unfamiliar
Add a missing verb
are unfamiliar
to
new Change preposition
with
languages
.
On the other hand
, several people
find this
development is
Unnecessary verb
apply
such
a waste of time because these languages
are no
applicable in Correct your spelling
not
this
period as medium
of Add an article
a medium
the medium
communications
. Even in Fix the agreement mistake
communication
working
environment nowadays, most Correct article usage
the working
of
Change preposition
apply
people
prefer to use Add an article
the people
english
in their daily life Change the capitalization
English
such
as replying emails
, Change preposition
to emails
massages
or calls. Correct your spelling
messages
Therefore
, authorities should spend public money on educations
field, facilities and Correct article usage
the educations
transportations
, so that every person Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
able
to enjoy its benefit as a whole.
Add a missing verb
is able
To conclude
, both views have their own pros and cons to
the country. Change preposition
for
However
, I believe that there is no need for the government in saving this
mother tongue as it only benefit
small populations.Change the verb form
benefits
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