Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by a small number of people ,some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages ,while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In
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era of technology, several local
languages
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that
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are no longer used by many
people
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due to
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its
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only spoke by minority groups or
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ethics
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ethnic
in
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particular
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a particular
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country
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countries
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. some individuals believe that the government should spend on saving these
languages
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while
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others reject
this
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notion. From my personal point of view, spending on
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issue is
such
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a waste of money as the language did not contribute to the development of the country.
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essay will elaborate
both
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on both
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views and
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will lead to a logical conclusion. In regard to the first statement, the main reason why some
people
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believe that these nearly extinct
languages
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should be protected
are
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is
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because
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that
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their play a crucial role
to
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in
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certain cultures
especially
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,especially
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in religious activities.
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,
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this
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these
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minor groups
afraid
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are afraid
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that their future generation will not
able
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be able
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to speak
mother
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their mother
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languages
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like their ancestor.
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, Malaysia has small groups of
etnics
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ethnics
ethnic
ethics
who mostly master their own
languages
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and
unfamiliar
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are unfamiliar
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to
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with
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new
languages
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.
On the other hand
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, several
people
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find
this
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development
is
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such
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a waste of time because these
languages
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are
no
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not
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applicable in
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period as
medium
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a medium
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of
communications
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communication
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. Even in
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the working
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environment nowadays, most
of
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apply
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people
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the people
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prefer to use
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English
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in their daily life
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as replying
emails
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to emails
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,
massages
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messages
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or calls.
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, authorities should spend public money on
educations
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the educations
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field, facilities and
transportations
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transportation
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, so that every person
able
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is able
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to enjoy its benefit as a whole.
To conclude
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, both views have their own pros and cons
to
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for
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the country.
However
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, I believe that there is no need for the government in saving
this
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mother tongue as it only
benefit
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benefits
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small populations.
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