During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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a Job in one of your restaurants.I hope you remember me, we met on a plane during our journey from Chicago to New York on Saturday 16th of May 2020, I have done my graduation as a Certified Executive Chef from the Chicago Institute of Culinary Arts, in the batch of 2002, I am interested to work as a senior chef and I have an experience of six years of in the same field. I am a certified professional specialising in making Chinese cuisine and Thai, continental as well, I can cook different types of foods, deserts, etc. as per my experience and knowledge I assure you that the above-mentioned position is suitable for me and prove my ability and skills. It will be beneficial for both. I am looking forward to your favourable response. your's faithful. Jhon Albert

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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