Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some
people
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think that the amount of packaging of
goods
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is slightly higher than usual and they expect manufacturers and
supermarkets
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to reduce the
price
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of
goods
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. Other
people
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argue that
customers
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should avoid buying overpackaged
products
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.
However
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, I would like to argue that
customers
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should stop purchasing
goods
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with a lot of packaging.
This
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essay will discuss both views and conclude with my opinion. On the one hand, Few
people
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support that packaging costs should be minimized on
goods
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that
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purchased
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are purchased
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by everyone.
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, some
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'
price
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is
comparitevely
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comparatively
lesser than it's packaging amount.
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, Manufacturers ever overprice the
products
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that they produce, but
supermarkets
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are
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in scamming
innocent
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the innocent
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public. Despite many
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knew
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this
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illegal marketing, no one ever attempted to raise
an
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awareness among communities.
On the other hand
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, some
people
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think that
customers
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buying these overpackaged
goods
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from
supermarkets
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should be avoided completely to decrease
their
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economic growth of
particular
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a particular
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product's company.
Instead
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of buying
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from
supermarkets
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,
people
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need to prefer some local stores, where shopkeepers fail to sell
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at
high
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a high
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price
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prices
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.
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, Awareness campaigns among
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the public
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should be raised to prove that small vendors are deliberately better at selling their
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in
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genuine quality at low cost.
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,
Customers
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should rely on
quality
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the quality
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of
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, not on
quality
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the quality
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of
shops
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the shops
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. In conclusion, I personally suggest that
customers
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should ignore purchasing overpackaged
goods
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from
supermarkets
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unless the
price
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is reasonable.
Furthermore
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,
People
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should stop believing supermarket
products
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blindly and explore things
by
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on
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their own, which is ethical and morally correct.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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