Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Some
people
think that the amount of packaging of goods
is slightly higher than usual and they expect manufacturers and supermarkets
to reduce the price
of goods
. Other people
argue that customers
should avoid buying overpackaged products
. However
, I would like to argue that customers
should stop purchasing goods
with a lot of packaging. This
essay will discuss both views and conclude with my opinion.
On the one hand, Few people
support that packaging costs should be minimized on goods
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
purchased
by everyone. Add a missing verb
are purchased
Moreover
, some products
' price
is comparitevely
lesser than it's packaging amount. Correct your spelling
comparatively
For instance
, Manufacturers ever overprice the products
that they produce, but supermarkets
are well-practiced
in scamming Change the spelling
well-practised
innocent
public. Despite many Add an article
the innocent
people
knew
Wrong verb form
knowing
this
illegal marketing, no one ever attempted to raise an
awareness among communities.
Remove the article
apply
On the other hand
, some people
think that customers
buying these overpackaged goods
from supermarkets
should be avoided completely to decrease their
economic growth of Change the word
the
particular
product's company. Correct article usage
a particular
Instead
of buying goods
from supermarkets
, people
need to prefer some local stores, where shopkeepers fail to sell products
at high
Add an article
a high
price
. Fix the agreement mistake
prices
For example
, Awareness campaigns among public
should be raised to prove that small vendors are deliberately better at selling their Correct article usage
the public
products
in
genuine quality at low cost. Change preposition
of
Moreover
, Customers
should rely on quality
of Add an article
the quality
goods
, not on quality
of Add an article
the quality
shops
.
In conclusion, I personally suggest that Correct article usage
the shops
customers
should ignore purchasing overpackaged goods
from supermarkets
unless the price
is reasonable. Furthermore
, People
should stop believing supermarket products
blindly and explore things by
their own, which is ethical and morally correct.Change preposition
on
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