You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: Say who you are Give details about the accident Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the accident that happened to me
last
week in one of your branches near Gold Star Shopping mall.
My name is Mandeep Singh living in Block-D on Hall street near your supermarket. I usually visit your branch to buy some groceries for home. last
week, I went there to buy some frozen meat with my friend.
After picking up some frozen products, we were walking around the long-life products area. All of sudden a piece of broken glass hit my foot's bottom through my slide. It was part of the food glass container but we could not find the other parts of the container. Once, we looked behind the racks, the whole remaining was lying there. Immediately we rushed to the hospital and got some stitches.
I would like to mention some points which can prevent these kinds of accidents in the future. Kindly hire some more cleaners to keep the whole area clean especially the backsides of the rack because it was too dirty once we found out the remaining. Moreover
, Kindly keep monitoring the CCTV surveillance in order to take quick action if something happens like that.
I hope you will take my letter as a serious matter and will assess the quality of your supermarket.
Yours faithfully,
Mandeep SinghSubmitted by mandeepsinghsony2022 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite