The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
According to
the bar chart, in 1995 around 50% of the people
were born in the cities
of Australia
and 60% were born in cities
outside Australia
. People
born in towns in Australia
were 20% and outside Australia
were 10%, and those who
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Australia
were around 30% and outside
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those outside
Australia
were 40%. However
, according to
the bar chart of 2010, there was increase
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percentage
of people
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were born
cities
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the cities
Australia
. The people
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cities
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the cities
Australia
reached upto
65% and the Correct your spelling
up to
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of people
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were born
in
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the outside
cities
of Autralia
increased Correct your spelling
Australia
upto
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On the other hand
, there was a decline in the percentage
of people
born inside and outside towns of Australia
. People
born in towns of Australia
reduced to 13% from 20% while
outside of Australia
it remains almost the same. Lastly
, there is a sharp decline in the percentage
of people
born inside and outside of rural areas of Australia
in 2010. In Australia
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however
, in the rural areas outside of Australia
it reduced from 40% to 5%.Submitted by tayyabkhalid99 on
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