The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps compare the current layout with the planned redesign of an industrial area in Norbiton. For the
part
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of the
town
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that is
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southern to the river, a great number of housings will be built with the current factories to be removed and axillary facilities to be built. New transportation road is expected to be put into use in the future. Meanwhile, there will be no major changes to the northern
part
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of the river. The southern
part
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of the
town
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will have many houses
be
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built
according to
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the plan,
while
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the present factories
being
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are being
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removed. A new ring road is expected to be built and
road
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the road
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will be extended to
northwest
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the northwest
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. Shops,
as well as
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a medical
center
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, will be reconstructed adjacent to the
ringroad
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ring road
. Meanwhile, a school; with a playground will be built in the southeastern
part
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of the
town
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. As for the northern
part
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of the
town
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, a new house will be built
while
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the current layout of
farmland
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the farmland
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will be preserved. It is worth mentioning that a bridge crossing the river will be constructed, connecting the northern and southern
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part
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parts
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of the
town
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words part, town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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