The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps compare the current layout with the planned redesign of an industrial area in Norbiton.
For the
part
of the Use synonyms
town
Use synonyms
that is
southern to the river, a great number of housings will be built with the current factories to be removed and axillary facilities to be built. New transportation road is expected to be put into use in the future. Meanwhile, there will be no major changes to the northern Linking Words
part
of the river.
The southern Use synonyms
part
of the Use synonyms
town
will have many houses Use synonyms
be
built Unnecessary verb
apply
according to
the plan, Linking Words
while
the present factories Linking Words
being
removed. A new ring road is expected to be built and Add a missing verb
are being
road
will be extended to Add an article
the road
northwest
. Shops, Add an article
the northwest
as well as
a medical Linking Words
center
, will be reconstructed adjacent to the Change the spelling
centre
ringroad
. Meanwhile, a school; with a playground will be built in the southeastern Correct your spelling
ring road
part
of the Use synonyms
town
.
As for the northern Use synonyms
part
of the Use synonyms
town
, a new house will be built Use synonyms
while
the current layout of Linking Words
farmland
will be preserved. It is worth mentioning that a bridge crossing the river will be constructed, connecting the northern and southern Correct article usage
the farmland
Use synonyms
part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
town
.Use synonyms
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