You have a suggestion for a park near your apartment building. Write a letter to your city's council board. In your letter: • Describe who you are and what your suggestion is • Explain why you think this suggestion will improve the park • Detail when you would like to see this suggestion in action

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to suggest some points for the
park
improvement by the Main Square road Block-F. My name is Mandeep Singh living in apartment no. 12 of Block-F.
This
park
is the centre of many blocks
such
as D, G, F and L. There is a heavy crowd in the
park
every evening. Irrigation pipes are usually kept broken by cyclists and children. So, my request is to make the irrigation system underground and increase the grass area. The reason to write you for
this
request is to avoid the leakage of water. Because the maintenance team only visits the
park
once a week and a lot of water
goes
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into the sewage. By rectifying the issue, a Huge amount of water could be saved and help to reduce the monthly electricity bill.
Furthermore
, Children can enjoy more independently by increasing the grass area. We already make a social team from related blocks to chip in some money in order to help with irrigation modification. We can deposit the collected money to you next week in order to start the work. The contractor promises to complete
this
job within 10-13 days. I hope you will consider
this
letter as a priority base and start the work by the end of next week. Yours Faithfully, Mandeep Singh
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