The bar chart below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different school in four country in 2001.
The chart illustrates the number of
hours
that each teacher spend in different schools in four countries teaching students in 2001. The countries
names are Japan, Spain, Iceland and the Change noun form
country's
countries'
USA
. Overall
, it can clearly be seen that most of the hours
spent is
in the upper secondary Change the verb form
are
school
in the USA
landing at the top of the chart, while
the least number of hours
was in the primary school
in Iceland.
First of all, in Japan, teachers spend exactly 600 hours
in primary school
. Then
, almost 650 hours
are spent in lower secondary school
. According to
the upper secondary school
, 700 hours
were spent by the teachers. In Spain, most of the numbers reached 900 hours
in upper secondary school
. On the other hand
, the least number of hours
were spent in primary school
reaching approximately 650 hours
. After that, the tutors spend about 750 hours
in the lower secondary school
.
By far, the hours
spent in Iceland in primary and lower secondary schools were similar
reaching 590 and 600 Change the adjective
similarly
hours
, respectively. However
, 900 hours
were spent by the teachers in the upper secondary school
. In the USA
, higher than 700 hours
have been passed in primary school
, but 1000 hours
were occupied by the tutors in lower secondary school
. The highest score of the hours
were
1200 Change the verb form
was
hours
and that were
occupied by the Change the verb form
was
USA
in upper secondary school
.Submitted by malak.ayman1 on
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