The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The chart illustrates the proportion of 6 different
age
groups of Australian males and females who exercised regularly in 2010.
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Overall
, women engaged in physical activities more than men, Linking Words
nevertheless
between Linking Words
ages
of 15 to 24, males outnumbered females.
It is noticeable that more than half of adult women from Correct article usage
the ages
age
35 to 64 exercised more in that year, Use synonyms
whereas
the young adults exercised less with a percentage of just over two-fifths. Linking Words
Besides
the Linking Words
age
of 15 to 24 that men had 52,8Use synonyms
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
no
other Correct word choice
and no
age
group got more than half. The only Use synonyms
age
group that females and males almost equalised in doing exercise was the seniors from 65 years old and over with less thanUse synonyms
1
% difference.Correct article usage
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