The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future predictions for 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future predictions for 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates data regarding Southland’s main exports in 2000 and the current
year
, it
also
provides some predictions about the
year
2025.
Overall
, it can be seen that Meat
Products
represent the category less exported in all of the 3 years chosen,
instead
International Tourism will increase exports until to 10
billion
pounds
over the years. Dairy
Products
make up the biggest rise between 2000 and the current
year
, reaching 10
billion
pounds
on
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exportations.
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more detailed look reveals that
Meat
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the Meat
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Products
future is on
decrease
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over the years, in 2000 6
billion
pounds
were obtained by the exportation of them, but
this
result falls a little bit in
this
last
year
, and it is predicted that it will decrease up to almost 5
billion
pounds
.
It is clear that
,
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the
achieve
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of 10
billion
pounds
obtained by the exportation of Dairy
Products
is significant but unfortunately in 2005 it will slightly decrease.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, products, billion, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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