The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future predictions for 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates data regarding Southland’s main exports in 2000 and the current
year
, it also
provides some predictions about the year
2025.
Overall
, it can be seen that Meat Products
represent the category less exported in all of the 3 years chosen, instead
International Tourism will increase exports until to 10 billion
pounds
over the years. Dairy Products
make up the biggest rise between 2000 and the current year
, reaching 10 billion
pounds
on
exportations.
Change preposition
in
At
more detailed look reveals that Correct your spelling
A
Meat
Correct article usage
the Meat
Products
future is on decrease
over the years, in 2000 6 Add an article
the decrease
billion
pounds
were obtained by the exportation of them, but this
result falls a little bit in this
last
year
, and it is predicted that it will decrease up to almost 5 billion
pounds
.
It is clear that
,
the Remove the comma
apply
achieve
of 10 Replace the word
achievement
billion
pounds
obtained by the exportation of Dairy Products
is significant but unfortunately in 2005 it will slightly decrease.Submitted by robertasottile.rbst on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, products, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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