In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. Do the advantages outweigh the drawbacks?

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this
contemporary epoch,
due to
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it become possible of people to have
a wide types
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of foods,which
is
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are
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transported
in
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all over
world
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the world
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.I deem that the merits of
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food
in the
world
are more
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rather
than demerits like
cheeep
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cheap
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products,long term
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and increase economy. On the one hand, owning of
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advantages of
large
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variety
of
food
in the
world
.Primarily,with the agenda of
global
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market, every
nation
able
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to sell their
food
items in the
world
market in order to increase
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the GDP
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of their own country.
Also
, they can get more products
ownself
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themselves
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and buy more items
on
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at
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cheep
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cheap
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price
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prices
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due to
variety
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the variety
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of
food
.
Furthermore
,with help of exports and
import
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imports
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, countries were able to make peace and greater built
long term
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relation.
As a result
,
this
notion
have
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many positive impacts on nations.
On the other hand
,there are some aspects that determine,the drawbacks of transporting of
variety
of
food
. To
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extent reason is that country get dependent on one
nation
if they are single
crop
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crops
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grown in the
worl
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world
.
For instance
, research revealed that in 18 century, china is
only
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nation
that grow tea
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in
world
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, which sell the product in
over all
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overall
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nation
.later they rise
their
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price of
food
and other countries
have
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too
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buy
that items
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.
Consequently
, it leads to dependence on other countries.
To conclude
, it is clear from the above discussion that
although
there are abundant of advantages of
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of
food
that transport in
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all
world
but
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but
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it
also
have
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some drawbacks that
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did not
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deniable from
world
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