The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps give information about the predicted changes in the construction of the
centre
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of the town named Islip and compared pictures of now and in the future.
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, it can be seen from the maps that the town
centre
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will be expanded and reconstructed so that it will be many facilities which provide the well-being of people
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as comfortable roads or new places. Nowadays in the
centre
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of Islip, only one main
road
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which is located on the north of the map so
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of a
road
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will be a way for pedestrians and in the countryside will be a dual carriageway;
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; school and housing around it will stay in the same place on south of the map. Planned a dual carriageway will circle the place where now located shops on each side of the
road
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and housing in the
centre
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and a large park which is placed on the south-east of the map. Shops are going to be replaced with bus
station
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stations
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, shopping
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centre
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centres
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, car
park
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parks
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and new
house
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houses
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which will have their own small way on the north side of the main
road
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,
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shops on the south part of the current major way will stay in the same location. The housing area is like to be removed and refurbished into modern homes for inhabitants and near there is located park
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planned to decrease in size.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual carriageway
  • pedestrian-only street
  • reroute
  • infrastructure
  • development plan
  • proposed
  • augmentation
  • north side/south side
  • housing/residential area
  • accessibility
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