Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children’s study. On the contrary those online games have produced a lot of negative effects on their mental and physical development . What is your opinion

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10 Years, it has been noticed that attractiveness towards

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video

games

has

been

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increased and

as a

result

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it is not contributing anywhere in the study of

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Generation.

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, it puts

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impact on young people and

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their

phsychic

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psychic

and physical health. I firmly agree that increasing

usage

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of

such

computer

games

will harm children's thinking ability and

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their physical activities. First and foremost,

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video

games

are addictive. Once an individual download it

in

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their mobile phone or

computer

and start playing it,

then

it will eat their lot of

time

.

Therefore

, people feel that they haven't or

less

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time

for their

study

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studies

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. These

games

are

puting

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putting

strong

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a strong

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impact on their

subconcious

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subconscious

mind

then

growing kids dislike their academic course and

unable

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to pay attention in their class. At online play stores, there are some gaming applications available for

mind

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a mind

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game

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games

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.

For instance

, maths problem solving, vocabulary improvement by filling

the

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blanks, science project completion including its tips and tricks and many more.

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, at certain

level

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video

games

are helping in their upbringing but

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their

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ratio is too less.

On the

Contrary

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, it

also

shows that few

computer

games

are life

threating

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threatening

. It has levels to pass and

mandatory

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to complete the dares it shows.

For example

, in 2021 one

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video

game

launched

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in

market

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called Blue Whales and

that

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has multiple levels related to real life and

player

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the player

a player

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is addicted

with

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it. Users

completing

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all stages and at

last

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it has

sucide

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suicide

dare. Because of

this

game around 100

individulals commited sucide

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individuals committed suicide

. It blocks

thinking

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the thinking

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skills of

person

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a person

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and they just follow it blindly.

Moreover

,

this type

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these types

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of

games

are consuming a bunch of

time

and that results

to

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less

time

for other tasks like

play

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playing

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outdoor

games

, gym,

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time

with family and

friend

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friends

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and going for

outing

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outings

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or visiting natural places. In Conclusion, I strongly believe that

computer

games

are worst for growing minds as it limits their ability, decision making and new thinking.

Also

, it consumed

their

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lot of

time

and they

cant not

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cannot

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concentrate

in

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their study and

curicular

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particular

activities with less remained

time

.