You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include: Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

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My name is Rustamova Laylo . I am writing

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letter to let you know that I am interested in the Property Management position available in your apartment complex, advertised in the Times newspaper on 5th July. My highest qualification is a post-graduate diploma in Business Administration. I have over three years of experience as a real estate agent and have recently been promoted to Supervisor in High Rise Constructions.

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, I have acquired real estate management certification from OSTRKS recently.

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the current role is quite enjoyable, I aspire to climb the ladder in

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field. Since my skills and career goals align with the position’s requirements, I request you review my attached resume. I am available from 9 AM to 9 PM on weekdays and from 9 AM to 4 PM on weekends. I would welcome the opportunity to elaborate

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on my background in an interview. I hope to hear a positive response from you at your earliest convenience. Yours Faithfully, Rustamova Laylo

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

property management
apartment complex
relevant experience
suitability
proactive approach
maintenance
tenant relations
administrative skills
multitasking
professional development
customer service
occupancy rates
budget management
preventive maintenance
conflict resolution
lease agreements
on-site management
organizational skills

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You saw an advertisement in the paper for a property management position at an apartment complex. Write a letter to express your interest. Include: Why you are writing Your suitability for the role How you would approach the position

The Greeting

People in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

Despite health warning, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. why should we be concerned about this? what solution would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the future, all cars, buses, and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, fast food restaurants and companies give money to schools provided that the school promote their products to school children. What do you think is the positive and negative of this in the development of children?