The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map depicts the current state of the
centre
Islip
town and the future development plans for Islip. Change preposition
of Islip
Overall
, there is a lot of improvement that will be made but the school still remained the same.
According to
the map, it is clear that
the countryside will be replaced with a dual carriageway since it will construct around the centre
of Islip. Moreover
, the shops will expand their area and become a huge shopping centre
with the bus station will be built at the west of the shopping centre
meanwhile the car park is in the south. Furthermore
, the main roads will change to pedestrians
paths that connect to the new housing at the right of the map. In the future, both housing areas will be moved, one to the west and one to the road. There are Change the noun form
pedestrian
also
a few shops that will remain in front of the pedestrian's pathSubmitted by farahhuzaimee on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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