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The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given map depicts the current state of the
centre
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Islip
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of Islip
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 town and the future development plans for Islip.
Overall
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, there is a lot of improvement that will be made but the school still remained the same.
According to
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 the map,
it is clear that
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 the countryside will be replaced with a dual carriageway since it will construct around the
centre
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 of Islip.
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, the shops will expand their area and become a huge shopping
centre
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 with the bus station will be built at the west of the shopping
centre
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 meanwhile the car park is in the south.
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, the main roads will change to
pedestrians
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pedestrian
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 paths that connect to the new housing at the right of the map. In the future, both housing areas will be moved, one to the west and one to the road. There are
also
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 a few shops that will remain in front of the pedestrian's path

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual carriageway
  • pedestrian-only street
  • reroute
  • infrastructure
  • development plan
  • proposed
  • augmentation
  • north side/south side
  • housing/residential area
  • accessibility
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