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The Plans Below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The Designs Below Show an airport site which is present and how it will look after the renovation next year. Highlighting in the illustration , The Southwest Airport will be expanded after the redevelopment. many facilities will
also
 be available and there is
also
 a big change in the number of gates. Looking into details , at the Arrivals Main
Area
, Cafe, ATM, and car hires will be available as the
area
 is of no
use
 currently.
Furthermore
, on the departure side, the check-in
area
 will be changed to a Bagdrop
system
. at the old cafe
area
, a new check-in
system
 will be built. the cafe will be moved to the south of the bag drop
system
.
Additionally
, the 8-gate
system
 will be transformed into an 18-gate
system
 where people will be able to
use
 travel in sky trains, where as of now, people
use
 a walkway to travel.
Moreover
, a new
area
 will be designated for the shops above the security passport control
system
, which is of no
use
 right now. the gate
system
 will be changed to a "Y" shaped Architecture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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