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The bar chart below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different school in four country in 2001.

The bar chart below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different school in four country in 2001.
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The graph below represents the number of
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 a teacher spent teaching in multiple schools in four different countries in 2001. In general, it can be seen that the most time spent by
teachers
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 teaching is in the
USA
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while
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 the least time spent by
teachers
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 is in
Japan
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 in 2001. looking at the details,
Spain
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 and
Iceland
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 had quite a similar trend. in upper secondary classes
teachers
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 spent approximately 900
hours
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 in both countries.
on the other hand
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 , in lower secondary classes
teachers
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 in
Spain
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 Spent more time teaching than in
Iceland
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. 750
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 in
Spain
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 and 600
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 in
Iceland
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.
moreover
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, a similar thing was noticed in Primary schools too, with 650
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 spent teaching in
Spain
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 for primary and around 580
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 in
Iceland
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. On contrary, the difference between
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 of teaching is huge between
Japan
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 and
USA
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. in
Japan
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, Upper Secondary got 700
hours
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 of service from
teachers
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. on the other side, the
USA
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 got about 1200
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 of service.
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, the same trend is followed in lower secondary schools too.
although
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teachers
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 spent 1000
hours
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 teaching lower secondary grades. in
Japan
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 only 650
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 were used by
teachers
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. considering primary, in
Japan
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 600
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 were taught by
teachers
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whereas
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 in the
USA
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 750
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 were taught.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, teachers, usa, japan, spain, iceland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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