The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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pie chart depicts the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France between 1995 and 2005.It clear from the graph that, energy production government development to better.

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what is shown, in 1995 nuclear and other have less use in

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year,

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coal with gas and petrol has a big ratio in these groups.but in 2005 nuclear and other products rise up to 10.10% - 9.10%.

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coal with gas dropped to 29.80% - 29.63%. but petrol goes up to 29.27%.

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, we could say that nuclear and other products with petrol they changing dramatically in 2005.but coal with gas proportion down.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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