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Once children enter school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social developments than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

#children #school #teachers #influence #developments #parents
The map illustrates the changes has been made in the
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 district between
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 1920 and 2020. It can be clearly manifested that the rural areas of
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sawary
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has
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 been converted into
urban
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 area and new amenities are added in
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sawary
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 like
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 pump and
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 office complex. The first and foremost
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 between 1920 to 2020,Tulebug Bros cannery was converted into the modern yang office complex .In order to cross the Elmwood river new bridge was constructed.
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 primary school has been shifted to another place and it was far bigger than before.
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, in the location of the old school a new
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loco
 petrol pump was constructed.The new apartment,
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 and shops have been built across
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 avenue.
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,the bike path has been introduced along the river by replacing the old beach.Interestingly we cannot find any changes In
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Miller's lake it is still similar to before.
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accommodation
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accommodation
facilities
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peoples
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 are living now in
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salary
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